What am I doing in 12 days? I am going to Kids Across America or better known as KAA! It's been my dream to go there! It's a Christian camp where various inner city groups from all across America come to one spot and have fun. I'm so excited. Of course I'd be spending my 16th birthday, but spending my birthday in one of my dream places? Oh yeah, I'm down with that! :) Plus, my family doesn't mind, I guess. Every birthday I've been at my house. I'm hoping that at this camp, I'll meet new people. :) COMMENT!!
Tuesday, June 29, 2010
DANIEL,
Monday, June 28, 2010
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B@TTL3F13L|)
I've been enlisted
I'm officially a solider
I'm handed a gun
I'm handed my gear
I'm walking down the battlefield
The enemy starts to shoot
I keep walking
No bullets penetrates
No blood is shown
I've won!
Nobody can hurt me
I'm invincable
Yeah...I'm invincable
ONE of my MANY freewrites :)
<3always
paytre mcCrimmons
I'm officially a solider
I'm handed a gun
I'm handed my gear
I'm walking down the battlefield
The enemy starts to shoot
I keep walking
No bullets penetrates
No blood is shown
I've won!
Nobody can hurt me
I'm invincable
Yeah...I'm invincable
ONE of my MANY freewrites :)
<3always
paytre mcCrimmons
Hip-Hop And Rap Lyrics Offer Positive Messages

What I learn from hip-hop is that it can help people can be hurt from people and they listen to hip-hop feel better about there life when they listen to music. Somrtimes when I listen to hip-hop and i'm mad at that to I will go to my room and put some music on ti coum me down when i'm at people.
I choose to write about this because I know more about hip-hop then my mom because she don't even now all the new raps and hip-hop people because she don't even watch that much TV it is on BET that is were i got my info from why I like hip-hop so much . Well now u know why i wrote about this one.
[Accordeing to Hip-Hop And Rap Lyrics Offer Positive Message, find out this info from my reseach] critices who contend that the lyrics of hip-hop and rap are violent and misogynistic frequent ly fail to see the positive messages many of the song deliver. yet, thanks to the magic of MTV, i became transfied by hip- hop at an earlyage- begging my mom for rides to the local recond store to pick releases by LL Cool J, Dr. Dre, and the Beastie Boys. In each album, found something familiar and relatable.
The fact that I-a petite, well-educated blond women- am rushing to defend rap music should at least make you think twice before condemning hip-hop as a genre that celebrates violence and sexism. Never once did listing to rap make me run out and buy a gun or sleep around. Rather, I was empowered by Salt-N-Pepa ttelling me "fight for your rights, stand up and be heard/ you're just as good as any man, believe that, words" and impressed by Tupac Shakur's willingness to rap unabashedly about his love for his mama.
When I moved to Los Angeles for college, joined other young intellectuals in classes on black pop culture and black literature, where I was often the only white student. I was inspired to study the lynching of [African American Teenager] Emmett Till after hearing him mentioned not by Bob Dylan [a white singer and songwriter]. but in song by rapper Kanye West. Which is why I've been dumbfounded by critics who have recently characterized rap as strictly the domain of materialists and misogynists.
Nobody says you have to be gangstas, hos/ read more, learn more, change the globe." Another one of the past year's best-selling rap arists,, T.I., seduces a women on the song "Why You Wanna" not by saying he wants to slp her behind, but by offering to "compliment you on your interllect and treat you wit respect. " Yes, the lyrics are punctuated by R-rated language and imagery, but there's a criitical difference between a song's profanity and its underlying message.
Expressing how you feel
When we have something to say to someoneshould we just say it or are some words
Left better unsaid?
Maybe after today we will never see
That person again and maybe those
Last words would of changed your
Whole life, and you chose to keep them inside.
Maybe that person feels of felt the same way
And they kept quiet waiting for you to speak up
And never did so the both of you lived your lives not
Knowing how the other one felt.
My Project
So since we started this class, i have been working on a video. Due to recent events i had to toss that whole thing out the window. Even though this has happened, I am not letting it keep me from doing the project. So without any further problems. Here it is.
MUSIC! and the effects on the Teenage brain!!!!
By: Chance Simmons
So what is the real effect of music on teenagers? Honestly, there isn't one. After doing research i have discovered that the music isn't having the effect on the kids. The kids had this in them the whole time, they are just using the music as an excuse to get away with the actions that they depict themselves by.
From school shootings being blamed on Marilyn Manson's lyrics. To the outbreak of teen pregnancies shortly after the release of the song "Slice of Your Pie" by Motley Crue. People have always been so quick to pass the blame onto someone else. It's so easy to say that someone told you to do something, but its impossible for people to swallow their pride and realize its their fault.
I have really discovered that the music scene has no real true effect on kids, other than what they allow it to. And by allowing it to take over in such a radical way (i.e. FSU. see earlier post.) that they end up hurting themselves and others, it becomes more of an addiction. They are addicted to the rush. They love the feeling. They can't get enough of knowing they are alive. But what they don't notice is the fact that they have been alive all along. You don't have to punch a kid in the face, push your body out for everyone to see, lower yourself to the sickening standards that are thrown in our face by the media everyday.
By saying that music itself doesn't effect a person I'm lying. Music can effect your mood. It can effect how you perceive things. It can even effect how you see yourself. But there is a difference between that, and the other side which is the radical take over of music on ones soul.
So why does any of this even matter? You might ask. Or you might say, But Chance this isn't a report as much as it is an opinion paper. But isn't that all a report is? An opinion based on facts found by one person. An opinion based on what we are told to say instead of what we have found on our own. This is the effect that can be shoved into us. But it is not done by music.
The real problem is Society. Society is the thing that has the strongest effect on a teenager. From being in school and always trying to fit in, to being at work and doing your best to be the best worker there. Everything people do now-a-days is to impress others. That's all it is. Society has taught us that we can't be happy unless the people around us are happy with us. It sounds confusing but its the truth.
We will never be happy, set to the standards that society shows us. We will never amount to what our society has set out before us. We can walk down this path, straight and narrow, or we can do what we as people should do, and that's start living for ourselves. Stop trying to impress the others around us, and stop worrying what people will think. We need to break free from the binds that society has pushed onto us, and we need to stop this dominatrix act that society has grown to have a fetish of.
I'll leave you with a person who i try to model my life after, and i hope you will see why.
"Civilization is the progress toward a society of privacy.
The Savage's whole existence is public, ruled by the laws of his tribe.
Civilization is the process of setting man free from men."
My research came from my life in this music scene, and from http://www.thestranger.com/seattle/Content?oid=25874
Please ignore the foul language, I can filter my mouth, sadly i cannot filter others.
Listen

Listen to the song here in my heartA melody I start but can't completeListen to the sound from deep withinIts only beginning to find releaseOhh the time has come for my dreams to be heardThey will not be pushed aside and turnedInto your own, all 'cause you won't listen[chorus]ListenI am alone at a crossroadsI'm not at home in my own homeAnd I've tried and triedTo say whats on my mindYou should have knownNow I'm done believing youYou don't know what I'm feelingI'm more than whatYou've made of meI followed the voice, you gave to meBut now I've gotta find my ownYou should have listenedThere was someone here insideSomeone I thought had diedSo long agoOh I'm screaming outAnd my dreams will be heardThey will not be pushed Aside or turnedInto your own[ Listen lyrics found on http://www.completealbumlyrics.com ]All 'cause you won't listen[chorus]ListenI am alone at a crossroadsI'm not at home in my own homeAnd I've tried and triedTo say whats on my mindYou should have knownNow I'm done believing youYou don't know what I'm feelingI'm more than whatYou've made of meI followed the voice, you gave to meBut now I've gotta find my ownYou should have listenedI don't know where I belongBut I'll be moving onIf you don't, if you won'tListen to the song here in my heartA melody I start, but I will completeNow I am done believing youYou don't know not what I am feelingI'm more than what you've made of meI followed the voice you think you gave to meBut now I got to find my own - my own
Factson on Butterflies
Diet-
A caterpillar's frist meals
is its own eggsshell.It then
spends most of their eating
the leaves of the plant on wich
it hatched. An adult butterfly
uncoils its long, straw-like pro-
boscis to sip nectar from flowers,
juice from rotting fruit water
from puddles.
Behavior
Life Cycle From egg to adult, butterflies undergo a series of physical transformations known as metamorphosis. After mating, the female butterfly lays her eggs on a caterpillar food or “host” plant. The eggs can hatch within a few days, or within months or even years, depending on whether or not conditions are right.
How Butterflies lay Eggs
Some Butterflies lay their eggs on the underside of specific plants, others lay them in mid-flight. Some Butterflies, like the Cabbage White Butterfly, lay their eggs on cabbage leaves - the eggs and the caterpillars that emerge presently are velvety green and blend in well with the cabbage leaves.

A caterpillar's frist meals
is its own eggsshell.It then
spends most of their eating
the leaves of the plant on wich
it hatched. An adult butterfly
uncoils its long, straw-like pro-
boscis to sip nectar from flowers,
juice from rotting fruit water
from puddles.
Behavior
Life Cycle From egg to adult, butterflies undergo a series of physical transformations known as metamorphosis. After mating, the female butterfly lays her eggs on a caterpillar food or “host” plant. The eggs can hatch within a few days, or within months or even years, depending on whether or not conditions are right.
How Butterflies lay Eggs
Some Butterflies lay their eggs on the underside of specific plants, others lay them in mid-flight. Some Butterflies, like the Cabbage White Butterfly, lay their eggs on cabbage leaves - the eggs and the caterpillars that emerge presently are velvety green and blend in well with the cabbage leaves.

death
Are you afraid of death? I'm not afraid i am afraid of loosing my family members because two of them have cancer and one has namonia that can kill her. I have a friend that is having kidney failure and they can't figure out what is causing it.
Vampyre: Histories Recurring Legend

The Vampire or Vampyre as the spellings of the old have it, have long been a interest among hundreds of different cultures around the world. In this I will answer questions such as what different types are mentioned throughout history, who was said to be the first in history, and who were some actual recorded "Vampires" in history. I hope to learn many things such as their origins, their nature, and most certainly more. If any readers are interested in the sources used for this, you should check your local library. I read and picked apart the books of Matthew Bunson (the Vampire Encyclopedia) and J.M Dixon (the Weisers Field Guide to Vampires)
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Stories of Vampiric creatures date all the way back to the Celtic ages. These stories tell of beings called Sidhe, or as we know them today, Fairies. Although they were said to be very shy by nature and in result would often flee from humans, there were a few instances where people reported that was not the case. Some recalled going into a very deep and extremely seductive trance in which they would lose consciousness. When they awoke they felt drained of all energy. But that wasn't all. Many found well-bled cuts along their wrist and various other blood tender places on their body. These cuts would vary from icy to touch or even to the extreme of smouldering underneath the flesh. It was believed that the degree of pain was dependent upon the amount of feeding the Sidhe did upon their flesh and blood. Indeed the Sidhe were Vampiric in nature, but they don't quite make the cut with what we know as a Vampire today. Later in history, in Romania, there were the Strigio Vii. Mainly talked about in legends surrounding the reign of the Vlad bloodline (Vlad Dracul, Dracul meaning"Dragon" and his son Vlad Dracula, Dracula meaning "Impaler") these were the first "Humanoid Blood Drinkers". Both Dracul and Dracula belonged to a society that believed they were direct descendants of the Strigio Vii. In his least sane of years, near his end, Vlad Dracula believed he had inherited the ability to not only gain strength and years of life through the drinking of blood, but by manipulating the dreams of those around him. Soldiers would often talk about the horrifying nightmares they had at night, some so extreme that all sanity and humanity they once had would disappear. Throughout history there have been those who were prosecuted by the general public through the fear they were a Vampire. One such person being an English woman by the name of Elizabeth Bathory, accused to practice Sadism and Vampirism. Or "Gilles De Rais, accused of sorcery, necrophilia, sadism, Vampirism, and cannibalism." (the Encyclopedia of Vampires) Many more as well. Some names such as Peter Kurten, John Haigh, and Fritz Haarman. All in all there are many different views, arguments, and legends surrounding the world of Vampires. One could spend hours digging through myths and legends.
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In conclusion, after searching through numerous books, I find myself fascinated by the deep roots and factual back bone of vampires. It's scary how the things that are recorded throughout history go through a pattern of similar recurrence. Do I think Vampires are real? It's plausible. I thought it was a bunch of hoo-ah before I read the history. Now? My mind is definitely open to the idea. So if you have an open mind and want to put your nose into something intriguing. Pick up a book on their history and origins. You may find yourself second guessing.
Blogging in a class room
I have blogged before in a classroom, but that was only one time, and no more. I thought that blogging would be really stupid, and boring, and i thought that it would just be a waste of time. I thought that there was not going to be a point because all you do is sit at a computer and just blog about things. I said "oh well, they're just going to see our blog post, and no ones going to care."
Well that's not true. you can express what you really think about things that we;re doing in the class room, or things that you want to talk about. No one criticizes you, and they don't say anything bad. They comment on it, and it can be fun only if you make it fun. There are a lot of topics to talk about, and I've seen a lot of good topics, and research projects.
I've learned that once you get to write about what you want, then you're set, and can do anything.
Well that's not true. you can express what you really think about things that we;re doing in the class room, or things that you want to talk about. No one criticizes you, and they don't say anything bad. They comment on it, and it can be fun only if you make it fun. There are a lot of topics to talk about, and I've seen a lot of good topics, and research projects.
I've learned that once you get to write about what you want, then you're set, and can do anything.
Friday, June 25, 2010
Myname
I choose to do my name
because I love the meaning
of my name, it is Havaenly
Shrine. My mother got my
name from a book of babby
names.
The orgin comes
from hawaiian I love
where my name
comes from.
Did you know
that Ahulani
can be a
boy names.
the pronunciation
my name is Ah hoo
La nee.
But when I frist
meet people they
alwasys get it wrong
but the more they pratice
the more they say it
right.
I choose this because
I know myself.
because I love the meaning
of my name, it is Havaenly
Shrine. My mother got my
name from a book of babby
names.
The orgin comes
from hawaiian I love
where my name
comes from.
Did you know
that Ahulani
can be a
boy names.
the pronunciation
my name is Ah hoo
La nee.
But when I frist
meet people they
alwasys get it wrong
but the more they pratice
the more they say it
right.
I choose this because
I know myself.
''Ahulani is not widely uesed
as a baby name for a girls.
It is not in the top 10,000
names''
That means that my name
That means that my name
is not common in the u.s.a.
but it is common in hawaii.
I learn that my name can
be use for both Meal or Femeal.
Where I got my information
htt:www.babynamespedia.com?meaning/ Ahulani
My opinion
Iam really happy that my
is Ahulani.
OH! MY GOD.. !!!
When i was young
maybe six years old
i love to the played game with my friends
We played 10:00 A.M to throught the sunset
At 9:00 P.M It's too, dark to play the game
Time to go home and we were going home
Then we heard a person is screaming and
My friend said " OH! MY GOD.."
and she ran very fast to her house ...
Our Game name was "COPO".
maybe six years old
i love to the played game with my friends
We played 10:00 A.M to throught the sunset
At 9:00 P.M It's too, dark to play the game
Time to go home and we were going home
Then we heard a person is screaming and
My friend said " OH! MY GOD.."
and she ran very fast to her house ...
Our Game name was "COPO".
DANIEL,vbc..



I see the picture, the sky and land, i see the sky, rainbow, cloudy and the big level water. the sky is beoutifull, i thinks. it is blue, and cloudy is which colore. the rainbow is very long and small and the rainbow is three color, i thinks blue, red, green. it is beoutifull colore. i see the water, it is big and long, it is any animals live in water, fish,eel, or all water aniamals. i see alittli rock and small land, i went home in the land over house and i went drink water. the cloudy went is sametime rainy and sametime hot. the sky is big, i like this picture bacuase i am very very important picture. the skys ligth frome, moon, star, and sun. the ligth frome the skye. the water niamls frome the river, the aniamals or all frome the land...,,,/
My Friends in Study Skills
Everyone is my friends, but there are three that are particularly my friends.
Brooke James
Mary Wigton
Daniel, Vanbawi
Brooke- I've known her for a while. She used to be intimidating but now she's not scary at all. I love her. She is my best friend forever.
Mary- I wish I would've met her earlier. We go to the same school. She is really cool! I love her too! I love talking to her.
Daniel- He is SOOOOO funny! At first he didn't know how to pronounce my name. He used to call me PICTURE but he's getting the hang of saying my name. He is really cool.
All of you guys are my friends. I made new friends this summer. Thanks for the laughs and what not LOL :)
My Poem Aletea Moad
Sometimes I feel sad so I go out side to the sunset to look up at god and tell him want I'm fell sometimes he said close you eye and think about a happy place and wish you was there and 2mins later he tells me to open my ye and the feeling was gone so I was happy that the feeling was gone some thing I feel like that I'm fat because my daddy calls me name so does my mommy and I go out side and walk around and tell God to let me fall down and pass out so I can live with somebody that loves me so I ask God and he said i made U like that if they don't like it they can step back and see what I'm made of with out calling me names this is why i ask God want should I do about this.
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